Here is my start:
Whoosh, I felt the waves crash over me as I swam out into deeper water, “Ella” I heard my mother screech “There’s a shark”.
Does it hook you in? Also here is a picture when I put my sentences into Adobe Express A.I

Here is my start:
Whoosh, I felt the waves crash over me as I swam out into deeper water, “Ella” I heard my mother screech “There’s a shark”.
Does it hook you in? Also here is a picture when I put my sentences into Adobe Express A.I
