Month: May 2024

Unseen Depths 2!!!!!!

Well you know the first one I did about the other two paragraphs of the story well I kinda wanna make it have three parts, so this is the second one, it’s a bit shorter but I’m really pleased with it. Here it is!

Paragraph – 3.

Through the sunlit roof of the sea people started diving down in scuba gear, the frantically dived down with knifes and started to cut the rope, finally after ages of bubbles and kinfies slipping in out of their hands it broke free. In a flurry of bubbles and sand the whales emerged from it imprisonment and swam away, leaving the humans in shock and in amazement.

So that’s it! It’s a bit smaller but it’s good isn’t it? (That’s a lot of It’s!) So the next Unseen Depths will be about the summary and introduction. Bye bye! 👋

Quick Write

 My Special Bond With Felines 

Write about a special bond you have with an animal

I would like to think that I have a bond with felines. I LOVEEEEEE felines! All types and I would love to think that I have a bond with them. I already think I have a bond with them, well my cat of course. I would love him to my heart bleeds and my body pleas. (That’s a bit over dramatic but who cares?) I love them and I will sacrifice myself for them. The big cats like Jaguar, Clouded Leopards Etcs). I love them and I think that I do have a special bond with felines, well I hope I do.

Quick Write

EO Quick Write. I’m a bit nervous about High School.

Are you looking forward to High School? Why or Not?

It’s a big, fat nope! I’m really nervous for High School. Cause well, I’ve been told that it is bad and I want to stay here. Primary School is the best and I really like my class. When I go to High School all of us will be split into three classrooms I think? And you can get lost really easy. Yes there’s fun stuff like, science, wood work and PE, but I’m still not looking forward to it. And you have to do exams and I’m not ready for exams, I hope that I’ll be in a class with my friends. The last thing that would be bad is the fights. Some of my friend’s siblings have came home and had been in a fight. Yeah that’s all the reason that I’m not that excited about to going to High School next year. 

Have you been in a fight in High School. Was it funny, scary, or pleasing

I’m Under the Sea!! 🌊🪼

So this past week our whole class has been making stories. It is about the underwater and it’s not really a story, cause you have to write about stuff around and like try not to add you in it? If that makes sense? We had to make this burger planning, where there was the introduction, then 3 paragraphs, and finally the summary.

I have done 2 paragraphs so far I’ll show you

 

Paragraph – 1. 

As I swam through all the bubbles a rainbow blur emerged, and then it unblurred  into a wonderful, beautiful coral reef. All types of colours and shapes emerged, it was lively and amazing. Schools of colourful fish swam past, and clown fish swam in and out of the anemone, there were with fish with different patterns and they searched the sea floor. It was draped with seaweed and kelp. Suddenly a big blue thing went past, it was a baby whale, it was cute and had sea urchin all over it. Little fishes swam around it, plucking their little beaks at the tiny whale. The whale moved on with it’s little fishy friends and behind it was the end of the magical reef. And then it was a deep dark drop.

 

Paragraph – 2.

I floated down the massive, dark drop, I felt that this place was grim and gloomy, as I got closer I could see bits of dead coral everywhere and emerged from the darkness was a old wooden, broken ship. The sails were ripped and shredded, massive rocks came out of the ground and had pierced the heart of the ship. Everything was dark and dead, nothing of life lived here. I swam on and it lightened up. As I swam into the light I saw a whale imprisoned in a fishing net, it was caught and trapped and it was squirming around, spreading bubbles and sand everywhere, suddenly something came in the distant.

 

Did you like it, tell me if I should change anything?

I Crossed the Country! 🏃🏞

On Tuesday we went to Kokatahi-Kowhitirangi School for the cross country! I hated cross country but still I had to do it. Mum said that I could do one lap if I wanted to. We went from my school, Kaniere to Kokatahi by bus! It was fun I got to sit in the back of the bus. We go to the school and put our bags in one of their classrooms, and then we got in the line to get ready for the start. BANG! We all started to run and jog, I was the first one but then fell behind. We jogged and I was already puffed! I started to walk and I thought that this would go on forever. Then I came to the starting line again for my second lap and I had to choose if I wanted to keep running or not. I chose to keep on running. I finally made it to the finish, and I got given a free ticket to get a sausage sizzle. I went inside and I felt like my whole bones were about to break, I was so sore!  I wanted to lay down and sleep.  Then Zoe and Scarlett, came back with LnP and Sprite, sadly I didn’t have any money and they were 3 dollars, thankfully Ava gave me some and I could buy some LnP, turns out we were not allowed to go and buy them cause it was only for the adults, I think? Anyway we went back on the bus to go back to school. I guess cross country was fun.

Have you ever won a race, I know I haven’t but I still do my best don’t you? 

 

I had a two day sleepover with my friend!!🦔 👯

On Friday after a game of basketball that I couldn’t play because I hurt my toe, my mum dropped me off at my friend’s (Essie) house. It was late, 6.30 to be exact, and I hadn’t had dinner! We went to the store to buy ice-creams for all of us then went to Essie’s house. When we got to Essie house, mum left and me and Essie started to watch “How to make Slime videos”, though most of them had ingredients that we didn’t have :(. We found two that we could do, a marshmallow one we you melted marshmallow then added flour and then ate it, also on with clear body wash and mouth wash and then add salt, then put it in the fridge for 4 days. We ate pizza, chips and burgers, then made the marshmallow slime, we were forced to eat it, it was yummy, real yummy, definitely yummy, (Just kidding it was blah!)

We then went to bed it was comfy, in the morning Essie accidently fell out a bed! (It was real funny)we got breakfast then got out of bed quickly to get ready for Essie’s brother (Beou) soccer game. We went all the way to paroa for it and Essie’s got hurt like 3000 times! We went back to Essie to find out that a hedgehog had come, it was all shivering and It looked unwell. We made it, it’s own sanctuary. And it started to drink from a egg that we cracked their. We called it Digger! Finally we had to get ready for a dinner out with Essie family. It was for Essie’s aunty’s birthday, we got to eat ice-cream cake, yummy! We then went to bed again.

In the morning we made the body wash and mouth wash. We put it in the fridge, sadly Digs was gone :(. It was sad. Me and Essie went on our scooters and went to harmony’s house to get a loaf and Essie was telling me to carry it even though it was her loaf! We also saw 13 dogs on our way! Dad picked me up and I went home to celebrate mother’s day with my family.

Have you ever had a two day sleepover cause I haven’t and It was so fun!

I Think I Broke My Toe! (Read on to see what happens)

S on Wednesday I was going around the classroom and then all of a sudden I slipped on a piece of paper and hit my big right toe on a cabinet. Boy it hurt! I stung, but I just thought that the pain would go away like any ordinary smack. Turns out when my friend stepped on it a few minutes later it hurt, like really hurt. I couldn’t feel it and I couldn’t walk on it. I went to school another day and it still hurt, my mum then picked me up from school around about, 2:35 I then went to the nurse place in Hokitika. They said it may be broken so they called the hospital in Greymouth to say that I would be coming over. I went their, first stopping to let my brother go to his chiropractor for his back. Then we went to the hospital to get my toe x-rayed, We had to wait there for an hour! Thankfully, Logan’s (My brother), chiropractor gave us a bucket of chocolate chips cookies! They were delicious! Finally we went to get my toe x-rayed. I was scared, Mum said it was gonna zap me! Turns out it did nothing but beep, (I was definitely not scared, Haha). Know the moment of truth! I didn’t brake my toe! I only bruised it bad, and another of this mathematics stuff. I was glad but I couldn’t do sports for a week. Yay.

EO Quick Write

A Yes Day is A Wish

What does you dream day look like?

The most ultimate dream day would be a…. YES DAY! A yes day is when your parents have to say yes to you for the whole day!!! I could even go to Antarctica, maybe? But still it would be so fun. I would go to every shop in town to spend all my parents money by buying everything that I wanted. I would then go to Stumpers and buy every smoothie and fries, and the Stumpers people would give it to me straight away, cause its my dream day. I would then go to the Greymouth pool and go on the hydroslide, no waiting in line I would be the first in line every time and they would pull me up on a lift so didn’t have to walk up those dreaded stairs. I would then go buy lots of food from Mcdonalds and KFC and spend my parents money on all the shops in Greymouth. I would then go buy lots of lollies, to much lollies really, and then go home to watch tv on couch, patting my cat while shoving lollies in my mouth. That’s the best dream day for me! What’s yours?

EO Quick Write

Lollies were only 1 cent!

Would you rather live 100 years in the past or 100 years in the future

I would definitely go 100 years back in the past. Everything was cheaper lollies where only 1 cent! Isn’t that cool! Mr Abbott said that him and his friend would go around asking if anyone had empty cans,, he would then go to the shop and sell them and come back home with a 1000 lollies. Also back then you could do more stuff, nowadays there very strict about our safety. Though they do have a point, our safety matters. I just think it would be way funner in the olden days and the future probably gonna a robot apocalypse or something like that. 

 

Now that my is my reason why I would go to the past! 

What place would you go to???….

 

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